Monday, June 8, 2009

Flynns Favourite Piece of Writing

I DROPPED MY SKATE BOARD ON MY BIG TOE , IT HAS BLOOD IN MY

BIG TOE , IT IS BLACK NOW BUT IT WAS WHITE , I THICK THAT  MY TOE

NAIL IS GOING TO COME OFF.

BY FLYNN

Emmas Favourite Piece of Writing

 On   the   12th  of    march    it     was  the    middle

school    triathlon.   Room9   and    room2   had  to  sit  in   the   ampitheatre .

when  I  put  my  feet    in    the   pool    it   [freezing]   cold.   When  I

got  out  I  put  my  shoes  and   helmet   on    and  off   I   went. I    When

I  dropped  my   bike  I  ran    and   I   won   

By  Emma

Ashleys Favourite Piece of Writing

On Friday after school I walked home and mum said we are going to Bayfair.Just when my family were eating I looked and Miss Cassidy was eating aswell we said hi to each other .Then we went off and had our food. Just then we had our first  night at our new house. It was so exciting and my bedroom is very tidy.

By Ashley

Matt's Favourite Piece of Writing

On  saturday   i  Played  rugby. I Loveed.  it.  It  was  awesome.  My  team  won.  we  bridged  and  ripped and  passed.

By Matt  

Luke's Favourite Piece of Writing

IT  WAS EXCITING WHEN ME AND MY FAMILY WOKE UP BECAUSE IT WAS SATURDAY. IT WAS SOCCER. WE WON 4-0. I WAS VERY EXCITER 

 NEXT WEEK WE ARE PLAYING AGAINST A GOOD TEAM.

BY LUKE.

Hirini's Favourite Piece of Writing

yesterday i started to.Work on lovely sunday. After that i got some money i got $4 for hardwork & the work i did was recyclins.

by hirini

Aidans Favourite PIece of Writing

On saturday we visited KatiKati. Me , mynana,poppa and mymum we walked

to the field.At the start we were losing rugby but then we ran an ran we just

zoommed an tried an tried an we sunddenly we won i thought yes we walked

back home. My nana found ten cents she gave it to me after we drove to

cool bayfair. After that we drove to the mount we hopped out of the car,

we walked to the shop we bought an ice cream, we drove back home then they left

our house.

By Aidan